Scene Critique

First Scene: It was fun to do. The movement was a bit sketchy and seemed slightly awkward at points. It would have been nice to rehearse a bit more for it. We were a bit stiff. There was a lack of trust in the scene.

Second Scene: Everyone was brilliant. It would have been nice to see a bit more pure interaction with Absolute and Lydia. It seemed a bit artificial. There was a bit more artificiality during the top of the scene but it vanished when Brian and Gustavo relaxed into the scene.

Third Scene: This was fun. Tatum was a bit off. She didn't seem comfortable with the role. I would have liked to see her pick up the bottle when it fell. The flipping through the books was distracting. It didn't seem much in character. The ending was nice.

Fourth Scene: Lines need to be worked on for Zane. It would have helped his character development to have the confidence in knowing his lines. The movement was entertaining. A little less would have been nice but I liked that they weren't really planted. The volume when Sir Absolute dropped his energy in his speaking to undercut his lines was lost as well. It was hard to understand some of the words. Slowing down just a tad would have helped as well.

These were great. Can't wait to see the next thing we do.